This story gives a good, in-depth view at the controversy stirring in this play before opening night. It gathers information from multiple sources and includes excerpts from the copywright contract as well as statements from producers and directors. The only thing I would like to see more of is a statement from the representative of Musical Theater International.

This story isn't based on anything Mfume actually stated publicly. It's hard to "put the rumor to rest" when the closure we are supposedly getting is in itself a rumor.

How can we be sure that the woman is his grandmother if she has not been identified yet? The lead identifies her as his grandmother but later on it says "the woman, who has not been identified." I would like to see this story interviewed in much more depth, including interviews with friends and family members about the nature of the boy and why he would allegedly commit this crime. The author has had plenty of time by now to update the story further. It leaves me with a lot of questions.

I think this is an entertaining piece that really tries to capture Schaefer's personality and impact on Baltimore.

I like the description of the foods and the overall writing of this piece. However, I would really like to see more information about what EcoBall does to support and promote sustainability. Are the chefs using sustainable ingredients? The article left me with a lot of questions about the event at the center of the article.